Prompt

Discipline is a growing problem in modern schools. Some people think that parents should discipline their own children, while others think it should be the responsibility of the government. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In contemporary education, the breakdown of student discipline has become a pervasive concern. While some argue that the onus of instilling behavioral standards lies solely with parents, others contend that the state should intervene by implementing standardized disciplinary frameworks. In my view, while government regulation provides a necessary structure for schools, the foundational responsibility for a child’s conduct must remain within the domestic sphere.

To initiate, Proponents of parental responsibility argue that discipline is a product of early upbringing. During a child’s formative years, parents are the primary architects of their moral compass and social boundaries. If a child is not taught to respect authority and adhere to rules at home, it is often too late for an educator to impose these values effectively later on. Furthermore, when parents take an active role in rectifying their children's transgressions, it prevents the friction that often arises when schools impose sanctions. For instance, a student is far more likely to accept a punishment—such as a suspension or a lost privilege—if it is reinforced by parental support rather than being met with parental backlash against the school.

Conversely, there is a strong case for government involvement in establishing universal disciplinary codes. Without state-mandated guidelines, schools are often left in a precarious position, fearing litigation or complaints from parents if they attempt to reprimand students. By codifying specific consequences for misbehavior—such as mandatory community service or standardized detention policies—the government provides teachers with a "shield" of authority. For example, in many developed nations, the state sets clear limits on what constitutes acceptable behavior, ensuring that all students are held to the same standard regardless of their background or the leniency of their parents.

In my opinion, the government's role should be viewed as a support mechanism rather than a replacement for parental guidance. The state can provide the "legal infrastructure" for discipline, but the emotional and ethical groundwork must be laid by the family. A child who is disciplined by a parent learns respect, whereas a child disciplined only by a government mandate may only learn fear of consequences.

To conclude, although the government plays a vital role in standardizing behavioral expectations in schools, I believe that the root of discipline is a private responsibility. A harmonious school environment can only be achieved when parental guidance is supported by, rather than replaced by, state policy.

Location: Vadodara, Gujarat

Renuka Nair, a former banker is the founder of Panache IELTS. She was born and raised in Mumbai and did her schooling from Apostolic Carmel Convent, a school that believed in holistic education. Despite Malayalam being her mother tongue, English was her first language of education. The nuances of grammar were inculcated in her during her formative years, along with creative writing. It was while she was pursuing her Bachelor's degree that she decided to hone her vocabulary. Having completed her Masters in Mathematics and Computer Science, she started her career in Vadodara, Gujarat in NIIT, teaching C++ to Engineering students. This was followed by 15 years in the Banking Industry, during the course of which she obtained a PG diploma in Finance. Wanting to start out on her own, she quit banking in 2012 and started training professionals initially in Corporate Communications, followed by Spoken English and eventually IELTS, TOEFL, GMAT, and so on.

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